Monday, 7 March 2016

Reflection on first draft

After feedback on the first draft of my magazine, i now know the area's for improvement; i need to focus on the conventions of a double page spread in order to make the magazine look more professional, and to make sure my pictures and choice of artist relates to the layout and interior features of my magazine.

RP

Dolby

A really promising first draft here- I think you need to go back to codes and conventions for the double page spread as you have not followed many of these. Consider how much info you should include on the contents- variety of features/page amounts etc. The pic of 'Young runners' on the contents is a little pixelated and they seem to dominate the mag rather than your main artist which should be the main feature of your DPS.

Cover Page


Contents Page


Double Page Spread