Contents- the yellow doesn't show too well- can you use box behind number of surround in text so it stands out? No name of mag to promote and sell. make the names of band clearer- some have too much detailed text- maybe just a poor font choice? Image in b and white- lighting a bit overexposed.
DPS- strong image bit no artist name or caption this is important for promotion. Stark layout and poor use of space at the top os right hand side- this is lacking some key codes and conventions. Find a way to distinguish the question and the answers.
Contents- the yellow doesn't show too well- can you use box behind number of surround in text so it stands out? No name of mag to promote and sell. make the names of band clearer- some have too much detailed text- maybe just a poor font choice? Image in b and white- lighting a bit overexposed.
ReplyDeleteDPS- strong image bit no artist name or caption this is important for promotion. Stark layout and poor use of space at the top os right hand side- this is lacking some key codes and conventions. Find a way to distinguish the question and the answers.